Difference: ChapterThree (1 vs. 3)

Revision 32005-12-04 - MirelaAndronescu

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  • ",for i=2,..." => ", for i=2,..." (insert a space after the comma)

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  • "such a probabilistic" => "such as probabilistic"

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  • "greater than than the prior" => "greater than the prior"

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  • Fig 3.27 caption: "blanked" => "blanket"

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  • "the marginals only involves" => "the marginals only involve"

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  • "a potential functions is" => "a potential function is"

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  • "may be updates" => "may be updated"
  • "max-product algorithm": in section 3.4, we only hear of sum-product, and max-sum.
  • bottom: "simple example in Figure 3.32" => "simple example in Figure 3.32 (a)"

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  • top: "Figure 3.32" => "Figure 3.32 (b)"

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  • "exists an directed" => "exists a directed" or "exists an undirected"
  • "This set is is distinct" => "This set is distinct"
  • Fig 3.34 caption: "together the set" => "together with the set"
  • "four variables show" => "four variables shown"
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  • Fig 3.35 and Fig 3.36: the variables' names do not match the names in the text.
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  • first line of 3.4: "problem if inference" => "problem of inference"

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  • "is set of numbers" => "is a set of numbers"

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  • Eq 3.42: not sure the last three dots (in both lines) should be there

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  • last line: "procedure separately for each" => "procedure for each"

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  • first line: "O(N^2M^2)" I think should be "O(N^2K^2)"
  • "to propagate a messages" => "to propagate a message"
  • "need be evaluated" => "needs to be evaluated"

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  • second line: "is expressed" => "to be expressed"
  • middle: "variables nodes" => "variable nodes"

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  • caption of Fig 3.42: "A factor different graph" => "A different factor graph"

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  • "for particular variable" => "for a particular variable"

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  • "we see that that a messages" sounds English incorrect.

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  • Fig 3.51: It would be nice to add "f_a", "f_b" and "f_c" near the black squares.

Revision 22005-10-07 - WeiLi

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  • caption of fig 3.1: "hand side of(3.2)" => "hand side of (3.2)" (add a space)
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  • Fig 3.8: the words "object", "position" and "orientation" are missing some letters (not sure if our printer is at fault)
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  • Fig 3.35 and Fig 3.36: the variables' names do not match the names in the text.

Revision 12005-09-26 - MirelaAndronescu

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  • caption of fig 3.1: "hand side of(3.2)" => "hand side of (3.2)" (add a space)

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  • the second equation is missing the equation number. Also, sigma^2 doesn't appear in this equation, but appears in Fig 3.5, which is a bit confusing.

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  • last equation is missing the equation number.

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  • Fig 3.8: the words "object", "position" and "orientation" are missing some letters (not sure if our printer is at fault)
 
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